Your paper had a very clear idea and I could tell clearly what you wanted to state throughout the whole paper. There were a couple places I corrected your sentences to make them more concise. One big thing is to make sure you are using in text citations especially in the introduction. You have a references page but make sure it is indented correctly.
Your abstract was very to the point and clear. It included information from all of the sections of your paper, but make sure when you state your gap that your audience clearly knows its your gap.
In the methods section, make sure your headings are more clear. All of the sections were clear and explained well. Very concise.
The results section was very good! Your graphs were easy to read and I could tell which caption went with what.
I would go more in depth in your discussion section just to give the reader a more detailed insight on your subject. This is just an option because your discussion section was well formatted and very effective!
Your data is clearly analyzed in the text and that is hard to do so great job! Stated percentages were very effective and clear!
Overall, great start to your IMRaD paper, I hope these suggestions help.
Your paper had a very clear idea and I could tell clearly what you wanted to state throughout the whole paper. There were a couple places I corrected your sentences to make them more concise. One big thing is to make sure you are using in text citations especially in the introduction. You have a references page but make sure it is indented correctly.
ReplyDeleteYour abstract was very to the point and clear. It included information from all of the sections of your paper, but make sure when you state your gap that your audience clearly knows its your gap.
In the methods section, make sure your headings are more clear. All of the sections were clear and explained well. Very concise.
The results section was very good! Your graphs were easy to read and I could tell which caption went with what.
I would go more in depth in your discussion section just to give the reader a more detailed insight on your subject. This is just an option because your discussion section was well formatted and very effective!
Your data is clearly analyzed in the text and that is hard to do so great job! Stated percentages were very effective and clear!
Overall, great start to your IMRaD paper, I hope these suggestions help.